Letters To Dramatica
A Reader Asks...
I have just recently purchased Dramitica Pro and had some q's i am hoping you
can answer. Define your use of the word ILLUSTRATE in the various stages of story
encoding.
Melanie Replies...
"Illustrate" means to come up with any kind of symbol that is exemplery (or
centers on or outlines or surrounds) each dramatica "appreciation" in a story
form. So, for conceptual appreciations such as "goal" it would mean to come up
with the specific nature of the story's goal that would fall within the category of say,
"obtaining", if that had been the selection.
The encoding stage has nothing to do with the actual writing that will become a part of
a screenplay, novel, or whatever. It has everything to do with visualizing the specific
implementation of an appreciation by fleshing out the raw category into a tangible
manifestation.
In the example above, if the goal were chosen as "obtaining" then encoding
would be determining if the goal were finding the treasure, obtaining someone's love,
obtaining a diploma - anything at all that is "obtaining" rather than, say,
"becoming".
If we look at a storyform as a skeleton, encoding puts flesh and blood on it. The flesh
is the nature of the structural appreciations, the blood is the nature of the dynamic
appreciations, such as acts or scenes.
Still, the story is not in motion until we move on to Storyweaving. Here, the word
"illustrate" takes on a different meaning. Now, instead of illustrating the
Storyform, we have to illustrate the encoding!
Suppose the goal is to Obtain a treasure. Okay, how do you tell that to your audience?
Do you come right out and say it in the first scene? Do you trick the audience into
thinking the goal is something else and then let them in on the secret? Do you illustrate
the goal by bringing it up in several different scenes in a story, of is it more like
Hitchcock's McGuffin, which gets the chase started and then is never heard of again until
the end of the story?
How you choose to do this comprises the process of "illustrating" in
Storyweaving.
Can a do-er change to a be-er over the course of the story (and vice versa)?
Also, I'm having a problem changing one character from be-er to do-er at my particular
stage of story encoding (seems I'm locked in)
The choice of do-er or be-er describes the Main Character's preference - not
necessarily what circumstances allow them. For example, a do-er in a Decision story will
be like a fish out of water, always trying to take action to resolve obstacles when what
is needed is internal work to set an example or adopt an attitude. Such a character will
try to resolve the obstacles in his or her preferential way until, as a last resort they
may give in and work at it in the way he or she finds more uncomfortable.
So, any character can respond either way at any point in the story, but it is important
the audience know what the character's preferential way of responding is, and that your
plot is devised in such a way to force that character into the non-preferential way if
that is how you want them to go.
I'm finding similar (identical) questions in the story encoding stages i.e. story
goal and OS concern. Why?
There are some appreciations which are second level. That is to say, they are
appreciations of appreciations. Goal is such. Concern (in the Objective story) is
descriptive of the broad category in which all of the objective characters' principal
concerns can be found. For example, a Concern of Obtaining might have one character
concerned with obtaining a diploma and another concerned with otaining a raise at work. In
each case, "obtaining" describes their concerns, but the encoding is unique to
each.
In contrast, Goal is the singly encoded concern SHARED by ALL of the objective
characters. Some may be for it and some against, but all share an interest in that
singular concern which is, by definition, the story's Goal. It doesn't have to be the
prinicpal concern of all the characters, but the common concern.
In stories, it is possible to have any one of the four throughline's Concerns be the
story Goal. This is a matter of which throughline the author wants to emphasize - where
the author wants the most commentary as the story unfolds.
Note that if all the other characters are focused on the Main Character's concern, that
begins to feel a lot like the Objective Concen, even though it is really the story Goal.
Because of this complexity, we have not included that level of sophistication in the
Dramatica software. We felt it was more important for writers to become familiar with the
basics of this extensive new paradigm called Dramatica before layering on the details and
nuance. So, in the software, Goal will ALWAYS be doubled up with the Objective Story
Concern. Later, when our terminology becomes a little more second nature, future versions
will likely include that kind of control.
Can you skip over some of the story encoding questions to answer one's further
down the list that you know or at least understand? Also, do you have to answer all the
story encoding questions, or does Dramatica fill in the blanks at a certain point?
Because the Dramatica Story Engine is non-linear, it is more like a Rubik's Cube of
Story Elements you can twist and turn by answering questions. The pattern you create is
completely in your control, yet you may not be able to predict what is going to happen on
the backside of the cube after a few moves until you look to see what's there.
As a result of this holistic approach to a model of story, you can answer the questions
in any order and skip over any questions you would like. When you have answered enough,
the cube "freezes" because you have made choices about your pattern on enough
sides in enough detail that only one combination of pieces can do the job. That is your
Storyform.
As for filling in the encoding, Dramatica will never do that. It can fill in the
Storyforming to make sure the "cube" is accurate, but since any given
appreciation can be encoded in an infinite number of ways, there is no way for Dramatica
to draw on that potential without a database.
At the MIT Media Lab, they are working on building such a database. Someday, this might
work in conjunction with the story structuring capacity of Dramatica, but for now, what
MIT's Cray supercomputers need to do with gigabytes of databases for Storyencoding,
Dramatica is able to do for Storyforming on your desktop with a basic, story-engine core
that is only 27 kilobytes in size!.
Should one just forge ahead even though he/she might not understand or agree
with the choices made by dramatica?
One should just forge ahead when he/she does not understand, but not when he/she
disagrees. Because using Dramatica for the first few times is a major learning process,
chugging along without complete understanding keeps the learning process from bogging
down. But if one disagrees with a choice from a perspective of understanding, then clearly
the Storyform being created is not reflective of the story the author wants to tell.
This can occur because of two reasons: one, earlier choices which were made arbitrarily
have now limited the remaining choices in such a way that something truly important. Two,
the author is not being consistent in his/her view of the story and is trying to cram in
something that doesn't fit with what is already chosen.
In the first scenario, simply start with different questions - the ones that are most
important. In the second, make a choice as to which of two incompatible concepts is most
important. In the end, your story will be more consistent and your message therefore more
coherant.
What is your definition of an intermediate writer in regards to the writers
dreamkit? Should I have started with the dreamkit? I've written three screenplays, with
numerous rewrites, not exactly what you call professional.What are the real differences
between the two (beyond the standard reply of "less steps")?
Both the Writer's DreamKit and Dramatica Pro include the Dramatica Writing System. This
system is an interactive program consisting of a book, worksheets, and a special path in
the software which is designed for beginning writers, or writers beginning with Dramatica.
It is designed to carry an author from concept to completion of a finished story in the
form of a story sequence order treatment at scene resolution.
So, either product is ideal for beginning and intermediate writers. Once the basic
concepts of Dramatica have become familiar, however, Dramatica Pro offers much more detail
and many more dramatic appreciations for authors who wish to follow their own path in
story creation using Dramatica's Story Engine directly.
Hope this is the proper channel to get these q's answered.
Seems to be!
Thanks.
Welcome! :)
Melanie
